>>2078113For the most part i gotta at least applaud the fact that you are trying to follow the natural flow of the body lines. However it seems you're only going 90% of the way.
The whole point of following the flow of the curves in a body is to make 1 continuous line. For example in the knees, you split the line going from the knees to the lower legs, when you should have made that as one continuous line. Same for the right arm and the right side of her body that connects to the butt. Using continuous lines gives a more natural appearance which is what you seem to be going for. On this topic, you really cant expect to get a 100% anatomically correct character. I mean, you can try, but I feel like there will be a point when the image loses it's original charm. Sometimes, just correcting the mayor unnatural flaws goes a long way to give a more natural look.
Another big problem I see with your image is the mouth. It's WAY too big. Anime style mouths are usually split in two, with a small gap in between.
Last mayor problem is the shoulder. Seems like you over-corrected trying to get a "natural" look. One tip that helps is to start at the neck and move on to the shoulder while keeping a nice smooth transition.
Take a look at the version I made and notice how my lines seem to flow together a bit more. I'll make another reply below this one showing the hidden parts of the lines.
