>>1816108>>1816109Not bad. Some of the hair tips, especially on the right side of the face, could be smoothed much better. There are also a number of hair tips that could use proper direction. Biggest flaw though is the poorly drawn ahoge. Don't leave it as a stroke. Draw with a stroke first, and then set the thickness. Then do Stroke to Path to remove the blunt ends. You can then apply a gradient across the fill. It also wouldn't be a bad idea to complete the top of the head since it is very easy to do.
