>>1479421Per your suggestions, I thickened the lines on the gun a bit, tapered the line on her lips and her eyelid, and adjusted the hair highlights to thin out the lines around her hair. I can't actually make that many changes to the lines on this, since once I've laid them out using strokes, I convert most of them to fills in order to add the tapered ends, at which point they can't be converted back to strokes. I had to redraw part of the gun as strokes as a result, so I could thicken it.
