>>1856152>Do your worst.Not bad, but I hjave circled a few things - you need to get rid of those lines going through the headband - it just looks odd and off..
The other thing is how you make some of your lines - they have wierd wobbles in them that also look off.
Finally, fix your damned points for the hair - they should be tapered like the fill in the shoulder crease.
The rest is on the image proper