>>1752904Just leaving a test of what I have done. I made the clock black which is really easier on the eye. Also, I toned down the dark part for the widgets, although I don't have any better ideas to what would fit better with my colors as you said.
This improvement is fine for now, thanks for the tips!
>>1752905I actually enjoy this color combinations but I see your point, those two last bars kills the progression. I removed them and tried moving the hole pattern down but it didn't feel right for me, I'm more of a fan of the green/brown combo.
Instead of desaturating the banner, I changed it to yellow so it resembles her boots. But I did toned down the shadow of it,in a way closer of Ononoki's shadow.
Thanks for your rate!