>>1575798>>1575801>lines on the handsHonestly those hands are extremely complex and I had to make a decision on the line thickness and I choose to go with a uniform thickness that matched the rest of the line work. I don't really know how to make them better, but keep in mind I get better with each vector so perhaps I'll learn a better method.
>area around the eyesWhen I first did the eyes I did a literal copy of everything up there and it looked messy and awful so I elected to remove a bunch of them to clear up the image. I'm not sure what your suggestion is, maybe you can draw it on the image for me.
>the hairI'm not really sure what you mean by that.
The entire vector is pretty complex, especially for my meager ability. I'm down to fix anything but I have to know what your talking about in order to do so. Also you have to keep in mind that some things are worth more trouble to fix due to how many clipping masks I used to get everything looking right.