>>1751404Couple things.
The feet have inconsistencies in the lineart. Many areas go thick to thin. I am pretty sure the circles should be transparent, considering they are in the original, and at the outer ends on your vector. The sock edges on her left foot also do not align with the leg.
A couple areas could be smoothed a little more. The knuckles circled are a little sharp. The one circled on her back could be smoothed as well as the one circled for her face. The one circled on her right knee could also be smoothed. The circle on her left knee is a thickness issue.
Two lines, one on her bow, and one on her sock, should be the same color as the lineart.
The top bow on her neck is significantly thicker than the rest of her clothing.
You are missing part of the lineart for her right eye on the left side. I would also try to make it look like the top of the eye connects to the part on the right.
Everything else circled in red that I didn't mention are thickness issues. Anything circled in blue is color peeking, or colored lineart overlapping other lineart.
