I'll start on my phone with a similar theme to my tablet tomorrow or so.
>>16437589/10 - Clean and looks nice, only suggestion would to make your lockscreen fit the color scheme
>>16437616/10 - Icons still look off, can you change their color to her hair color?
>>16437747/10 - The widgets need to be removed and your render is too low quality. The idea is really nice though
>>16437854/10 - You need to make your icons and widgets stand out, preferably using colors from the render. Solid blocks of color help.
>>16438047/10 - I like it but lockscreen seems off. Not quite sure what though...
>>16438246/10 - Either get rid of the bottom icon or decrease the space between them all and move them up, it's too close to the render. Also you should hide your notification bar and change the colors of your icons to a grey from her shirt. After you do that, I'd give it an 8/10.
>>16438358/10 - I really like your concept but I'd make all the transparent stuff a bit less transparent. Else it looks fantastic.
>>16438468/10 - Only thought would be to change the icons to the off white of her clothes. I like it.
