>>1628604Your ends are terrible. You also need to learn to use less nodes, at times.
Biggest offenders, is the eyes - youcould have just doen two-point fills like you did with the eyebrows. Really.
And a lot of the termination ends should have a nice taper to them, as if you had done two-point lines.
The Green circle is what your ends should be like for ALL your cornered areas that end in points. Use this as your best example, and redo the rest to match.
You still have consistency issues. Rethink your lines a bit.
The intersections of some lines looks really wonky, with these "flares" near the intersection.
What you need to do is make the line's nodes parallel to keep it looking "sharp" and "smooth"
You're also too free with the nodes - less is more, if the bezier handles can handle it (and yes, it's a pun, John.)
The lines for the irises? I'd nix them. You also have too many nodes and rough spoits in the mouth lines, as well.
And the tie and clothing? You have them intersect too "cleanly" with a solid line that looks off or "broken" I'd do each section of the tie as its own line (the knot, and the sides of the tie.) This goes for some of the wrinkles in her sleeves, too.
Hope this helps.
