>>1606905I apologize that I wasn't around for a while, I'll direct my attention right to your newest version in this post:
>>1607891This is a big vector and therefore there are lots of mistakes. The ones I marked red are either lines that don't touch, or small lines that should be erased, you probably placed them on accident.
The blue ones:
1) This entire line is wobbly as hell
2) The thinner line doesn't follow the thicker one and gets awkwardly thin at the right end, revisit it.
3) The left arm line is thicker than the right one.
4) This line's end is just cut off.
5) That one line is really thick on one side and then gets reeeally thin when it makes a knick to the right
6) The line that end the belt should be as thick as the upper and lower ones from the belt. Just look at it and I hope you'll understand.
I know these seem like a lot, so take a deep breath, and work through one at a time! I hope this helped you!