>>2140580You're lines definitely seem too bold, I'd try to slim them down a bit. There are also a few curves, top of her head for example, that are a bit bumpy, this can be caused buy using too many nodes in a curve. A trick and a good rule of thumb to avoid both of those issue is to practice laying down your nodes in pairs and keeping their handles parallel on each side. Example attached. I'd also recommend using the ellipse tool for the shape of her pupil instead.
