>>1447285>>1447274Added the fixes, color swatches, and for that hair, It really looked to be something they wanted to scrap, because it is too odd to be anything, so I scrapped it. I think it looks a lot better without it.
The eyes: I added a gradient to instead of following the full eye suggestion - I liked them the previous way (with actual pupils instead of "color smudges", and thought this a good compromise)
Any other comments welcome
