>>1709572>>1709634What he said. You might want to look up some other screenshots, or look up general skin colors to get it right. Line wise, consistency is not terrible. There are obvious places where things are considerably thicker, like the bone lines for the back and the ass lines are much thicker than the longer arm and leg lines.
The main issue you have is using the nodes correctly. You are using too many sharp nodes in the wrong places. The elbows should be smooth, the knees should be smooth, and the fingers should be smooth. The fingers are the biggest culprit. They either have sharp points for the knuckles or at tips of the fingers. Some also miss knuckles entirely. I decided to do her left hand to illustrate what they should look like, generally. I also threw in some skin color, but that color is more of an "alive" color. I don't know much about the show, but if they are supposed to be dead, you would want some skin color that has a fairly gray tone to show some decomposing.
