>>2039787Couple of things:
- the grey stripe on her hoodie is missing
- since it is without shading, the zipper looks jagged and I would have made it like a smooth-ish line (I'm probably guilty of not doing it this way since hindsight's a bitch). and it doesn't go all the way down
- the white line between the red and purple is quite odd, maybe a layering error?
that and some sharp nodes that should be smooth (finger, some parts of the jacket. rule of thumb - clothes and skin, if ambiguous, are generally smooth rather than sharp)
Other than those few things, not bad. I would appreciate it, if you can find the time and desire, to fix the things you agree could be better.
