>>2125901Nice job. Addresses the qualms I'd mentioned in
>>2125890 about them looking out-of-place against the background.
Yours is much better.
I hope you won't mind my offering advice. Same as I gave in a previous thread.
The horizon line (green) indicates the observer's viewpoint and cuts through ALL objects at the same distance above the (assumed level) ground. Note that it passes through a truck (far left) about 3/4ths of its height. So the girl's faces are also that high. I think they ought to be reduced or simply lowered even if it means cutting off their hems.
