Reposting mine and rating others.
>>2002374Paper is nice. As the previous anon said, work to improve contrast with your background. Everything should clearly stand out on your home screen. Also it's got too much going on in my opinion. If you're going to have a wallpaper with quite a bit of "noise" like yours, you want to cut down on apps and widgets.
>>2002457Looks nice. Personally I'd hide the status bar and add a battery widget as there isn't much going on. Nice and simple, but almost seems bland with just the 3 icons.
>>2002098This is a little rough. If you're going for a certain theme, you need to stick with it. Pixel font, mixed with cursive? No sir. Also, everything is black and white, except for a red accent, and then the one widget with a different color is... Pink? If the music widget and image is supposed to be the center of your theme, enlarge it, make it draw attention more. It seems like there is too much unused space, and the space that is used is used somewhat poorly. Your widgets aren't wide enough to fit your home screen, but there isn't anything in the middle that they're tapering out of, so why aren't they wider? Sorry for picking it apart, not trying to be a dick, trying to help you make something that looks as good as possible next time!
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>>2001917 too many icons. I like the bar at the bottom, and I personally would have that as the only feature, barring maybe a clock up top, with that wallpaper.
Hope I helped anyone, and wasn't too harsh/uninformative
