Webm to see it in motion:
https://u.pomf.is/wbwzmz.webm>>1873652Cute as fuck, clock being so spaced out is kinda odd and the super thin font really stands out. Might also wanna add a numeric temperature next to the weather icon.
>>1873694>I wrote this out once and then 4chan sucked more dicks than me.Has happened to many damn times to me as well. Hit backspace and the whole thing is gone. Kudos for typing it out again.
As for your rice, I'd personally change font. The difference between the two walls is also kinda jarring, maybe go for two of a similar style from him? I.e. fully colored, or sketchy, etc. since a fully rendered pic looks really noticeable next to a sketch.
>>1873697Read the guide
>>1873704Google is your friend. I'd keep a consistent icon layout: all text, or all icons. Also more organization in general.
>>1873733Cute, very wintry. Only complaint is that the icons are pure black, which has really high contrast compared to the clock and music boxes.