>>1492885Lines could be more smooth in some places but it's good!
Red: Thickest line there is, thin it out.
Orange: Consider ending the line going into the face rather than curving down.
Yellow: Should all be black to match other lines.
Green: Cut off before it pokes into the skin area, or make longer so it feels like it should be there.
Blue: Make that black since there aren't any other purple lines.
Purple: Doesn't need to be pointy.
No harm done if you're trying to stay true to source material, but I'm fairly certain Rei should be more pale than Asuka.
