>>1525232Overall, not bad. A few small things to change, though, as seen on the image I posted. There are two blunt ends that stick out and should be made tapers and a lot of places where the lines should be flush to an object - mainly line to shadow.
Again, most of it is minor stuff like ends not meeting, but you do have a couple of line consistency issues that pop out on the image, most of them in the breast area.
The glasses have a twofold issue: first, the lines should be parallel to each other, and second, only for the glasses (because they are more "mechanical" the lines shoudl be a lot more uniform, both i the color thicknesses and for the black lines. If you didn't use strokes, this would be the only place I would say you could get away with it.
Also, the ball ends - I caqn't see the other, but the bottom definitely needs to be smoothed a bit.
Other than that, keep up the good work.
