>>1526821For a first try, I'd say that the lines are very good. The curves are well done and the conscistancy of the width is good enough. As far as faults go, facial details could use some fixing. Bluntly said, the eyes are way too bright, even considering this is Kanade. As it is right now, the mouth just doesn't cut it, also bringing a smile to a kuudere's face might be a very hard task. Maybe you should settle with the usual emotionless expression. I'd also suggest not using the eyedropper to directly color your character, screencaps from anime imply that the lighting will be adapted to the scene. I've attached a vector I found around the net which might help you a bit with the coloring and the expression. Hopefully, this can help. For the rest, get chance and luck.
