>>1742548Couple problems. I circled areas where there are thickness issues, mostly in the hair, face, and clothes. The colored lines are really awkward though. I like them in the hair, but everywhere else is a little out of place. For instance, it is odd that most of the eye is black, but the bottom eye fold is all of a sudden the grayish fill. It also doesn't really fit on the dark part of the shirt, as the colors between the lineart and fills are much too contrasting in terms of the rest of the image. The nose on the face also looks really odd being a shadow fill instead of a black fill or the same fill color as the lineart.
Coloring is really odd. The shadows on the hair lose a lot of emphasis as you made them much lighter. In general, it seems that your shadows lose a lot of shading compared to the original, so you may want to darken them all. The face/skin base color is very bright and white and could use a lot more saturation. It may also help with the blush, since it currently looks very strong with how white the skin is. The blush could also have the blush lines from the original.
