>>1641541I know it's supposed to be a "style" but even so, the line inconsistencies really makes it look off.
I especially don't like how it is using random terminations form points, from blobs, to clean point terminations.
The other annoyance, is showing a pen stroke and having a sharp corner is fine, but you have the corners not parallel to each other, and that is grating, too.
With some tweaks and attention paid to the areas I circled, it'll look better...
