>>1823791You got a lot of color peeking. Got one under the left girls hair, and the collar for the left girl. For the girl on the right, you have color peeking on her right sleeve, and the shadow of the hair is going over the collar. The area of coloring by the neck should be the same skin color and not white. You got some color peeking on her left shoulder Some of her finger is peeking behind her left sleeve. I am assuming the random separation between her two arms is intentional, but it looks bad. Some of the shadows in her hair are bad. The shadow on the left is very poor, and the one to the right doesn't make much sense without the context of the lines. The coloring for the skin is fairly poor for the left girl. Use the HSB scale to adjust the coloring, and adjust it by increasing/decreasing Saturation of Brightness.
It's a lot less shitty than your previous attempts. Tutorials are important, so don't ignore them in the future.
