>>1888584Here are a few things I noticed. In general, your outline is too bold, I'd recommend keeping it a bit thinner on your next project. I also circled some of the ares where there's a contrast too big in thickness on the same line. For those white lines on her dress/flower, I'd try to do like the original and have them appear over the shading instead of under. They should all look like the one I circled on the left, for example. Also, the line of the fold at the bottom would look better if it connected at the very bottom, following the fold better. And lastly, you missed or maybe omitted one of the outlines at her neck. It might look a bit awkward due to the shading near it so I'd recommend either making it darker or lighter than said shading. Hope this helps.
