So I finally managed to finish the Hotaru linework and I'm looking for advice again , I tried going a lot thinner like Dekodere said but i don't know if I managed properly , and I can't do that finger on the right in any way maybe i did the hand wrong?
Source:
http://i.imgur.com/Tj23LPi.jpgHigher res:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/4jj1m1lwcrhwo47/Hotaru5-01.png?dl=0