okey, another one of hestia from danmachi.
with this one i tried to make use of some of the tips i received here. i tried to establish a base line thickness for the skin which was a bit weird because i wanted the places that come out under the clothing to be thicker to emphasize her clothing being so tight. but i made the clothing lines much thinner so there is definitely some contrast now in the lines.
her ribbon looks super weird because i couldn't really make out any details in the original pic, i will probably have to go and do a ribbon of my own rather than trying to replicate the shape i see there
this is the original pic
http://i.cubeupload.com/OeS1e6.jpg 