>>1451441I changed everything you pointed except above her skirt as I don't really get what's supposed to be showed... Thin lines were initially supposed to be part of my style but it doesn't look that good.
>>1451449Colors aren't that much of an issue since they can easily be rebalanced at this stage. My initial goal was to get an HD of the source as that would allow me to print it on a tshirt so I should indeed take great care of how it will turn out depending on the background. I still haven't thought about which colors I will use though.
>>1451450I agree with you as far as criticizing stands and lines consistency. For the rest I'd be thankful if you could throw a glance at the updated version, eventhough for the hairclip part it actually was a single badly-traced line. Hands indeed were a pain in the ass and I still don't know how I can make them look better. I'll take any advice for that.
Many thanks to the three of you for your advices.