>>1915773Once you get the lumpiness fixed, you should work on the areas pointed out:
Red are key areas that need fixing. The "lip in the hair should merge into the hair and not fo off into space (if you continue the line, it goes nowhere but out. If anything, it should line up with the bottom of those feathered strands right below it.)
The breast area is a whole slew of incinsistent lines that need to match the thickness of the rest of the dress closer. Simce the majority of your lines are thick, I pointed you to the average of all the lines for thickness. THIS line should be your guide in how thick to make the rest on the dress (except the trim line, which has its own pointed out)
Same with the hair - the one pointed out is the average of all the others, and would be your best bet for thickness consistency. You should go through all your lines and make them consistent.
* The blue are lines you have tapering, but with the rest of the dress having thicker lines, it looks silly (yes, I know it was there in the original, but with vectors you can fix these things done for time contsraints) Either maked these solid and the thickness pointed out on the dress, or make the dress lines thinner, which makes it lose all body, but I digress..
* The yellow is a spot where you need to make it darker. still. Again I digress.
Hope this helps.
