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>>2164617 (TWZ), really, really sorry I never got back to you on this when you posted it. It looks great, thank you! Just one main thing though, but the image is slightly recentered and some of the bottom is cut off. If you could recenter that it'd be great.
Also, I guess try smoothing out the hair on the left and right girls- the lineart where the text used to be on the left's hair is a bit rough, along with the new lineart on the right girl's hair.
Or if someone else wants to pick some of this up.
