>>1893237Catched a few things that bug me. First, the top of the crown could look more symmetrical, either move the tip or make it round. Not sure if it was intentional but you left the inside of her ear black instead of dark brown like the rest. Also not sure if I like the color you picked for her mouth and nose, it seems a bit too light. Fingers of her left hand look like they're detached from her hand, also the thumb shouldn't be that short, it's supposed to go all the way up and under her hair, refer to the example. For her eye, I don't see why you would need meshes, they're simple enough where they could be done with normal radial gradients and solid shapes like I demonstrated on the attached pic but in the end it's up to you. Also, try and avoid having points going too thin when adjacent to a thicker line like on her right hand, it gives a pretty bad contrast in line thicknesses. Lastly, the lineart area I circled on her skirt shouldn't have part of the shadow in it, it could work if you did this to stylize and added it to multiple areas but, as a stand alone like this, it looks out of place.
