>>1543670I know a lot of it is the art style, so the things I pointed out are more suggestions than anything:
RED: kinks and things that have oddities to them that should be addressed - if it were me, the big toe and its toenail would be two complete lines, with the toenail being thinner.
The eyes, while okay, look of. I think the pupils need to be "centered" more to the point where they look more liek they are looking in the same direction as the irises, as well as increased about 1/4 inch or so..
GREEN" Artist oddity #1: this is a machined piece and thus, those lines really shouldn't be noticeable from that angle - we should see the top of the goggle and nothing else for detail until we get to the top of that buckle and the lines leading up to it.
YELLOW/ORANGE: Artist's issue#2 - again, machined, again, spacing should be key.
Hope this helps. Otherwise, it looks great, and I am not a fan of the *gari series.
