>>1748807>>1748812Pretty solid. I highlighted the areas that need some work though. The hair that was added on the bottom left side is kinked too much. The hair should be much smoother. You should be able to do that strand with just the nodes at the tips and end. The main hair strand in the front of the face lacks curvature at the tip. It also bends too much when connecting to the next hair strand. Like Nakki mentioned, the hands look weird disconnected. Connect that last finger so we can easily distinguish her right and left hand. Last major area is the line for the shirt. It is kinked too much where the breast is. Extend those nodes out further so they bend more smoothly.
For thickness, the hair is pretty consistent. The skin however is not. The fingers are much thicker than any other skin thickness. Match the rest of the skin thickness to those of the fingers so that they are consistent. Also, you do not have to make the thickness the same as mine. I tend to make the chibi thickness thicker, but that is merely just personal preference.
