>>1880707Not bad, but here are some things:
1) You are fairly wobbly with your lineart. Use less nodes and more handles so you can keep the lineart smooth between nodes, especially for areas of the hair and clothing.
2) Some of your hair lacks curvature. Always be trying to curve the hair in a certain direction, so it does not appear flat.
3) The black stripes on the white part of the shirt are very inconsistent. Draw all three lines as separate shapes, and make sure you keep the nodes and handles parallel in placement and handles at all times.
4) Avoid using sharp nodes at the tips of fingers unless you can clearly identify a nail from the original. Otherwise, keep the tips smooth.
