>>1875675>>1875678When you've been vectoring for 3 years, you know how to use the pen tool. You have to minimize nodes, and use handles effectively. Only place nodes at major curves, and play with the handles before adding another node. The less nodes you use, the smoother and cleaner your image will be. This is vitally important, considering a vector is viewable at very high resolutions. This only gets better with practice, so do more vectors with that in mind, and you should naturally get better. Getting more sleep also helps.
>>1875701>>1875702Not bad, but here are some things.
The hair from the tail should be under the leg, much like the rest is under the shoes. The hair at the top left under the left ear has a color error. There are far too many nodes for the clothing next to the hair. Only place nodes at the major curves, and keep the area smooth. Wobbly lineart from the original does not translate well to a vector. You're missing a piece of hair on the bottom left. Some of your hair tips lack curvature, or do not smoothly go towards the tip. Use the handles at the tip of the hair more to give it direction, and make sure you keep the curvature to that tip smooth, by using handles more, instead of extra nodes. The shoe laces have far too many nodes. Keep that area smooth, by only placing nodes at major curves, and using handles to fulfill the rest.