>>1780014You are missing virtually every highlight in the original. There are multiple areas on the hands, stomach, and legs that are missing shading. The shading present is very light in comparison to the dark coloring from the original, and many hard shadows that helped guide me to certain areas is now non-existent.
The gradient used in the eye is very poor. The spreading between the colors is too close, with hard transitions in coloring between the changes. The inner pupils also do not follow the angle of the outer eye and look out of place. The mouth is simplistically drawn and makes the already bland and boring face even more boring. The ears are oddly colored in comparison to the original, and drawn differently as well.
The lineart is also very thin, especially for the hair and skin. The thickness is noticeable on the armor and clothing, but the rest fall much too thin. The hands are crudely drawn, mainly at the finger nails. They look very dull, and are not following the same direction as they are in the original.
I will post a second image with what I have already done for the previous anon that tried this to show you what I mean in most areas.
I'm starting to feel pretty bad for the OR, striking out twice so far.
