>>1774701>>1774706In addition to what has already been added, here are some things I found.
Note that most times, when dealing with clothing, you want smother ends unstead of sharp. A few exceptions are out there, like ruffles on dresses and lace, but go look at a dress shirt and you'll see that even a "sharp-tipped" point to a collar is still blunted.
I pointed you to places that were good, and used those places as refrences for places you could use some work on.
Also, I found more bleeds. All are on the image, with some of my suggestions as text...
