>>1497205Good for the most part, but you really should look over it carefully before posting, since I found a lot of issues.
The ones in red are issues with how you ended those lines. It seems like you tried to end them differently, probably to the artists version, but it just look weird. Just end them sharply as it will probably turn out better.
The ones in blue are blunt edges that you missed that you should smooth out.
The ones in green are issues with some of the ends of the lines not ending properly thickness wise. Make the thickness at the ends greater, because it looks really awkward having a space in the middle of it, near the ends (you should be able to clearly see it).
The ones in purple are mainly thickness issues of lines or lines that should just be redrawn especially the hair lines that should be overlapping each other (that one should be the extra thick purple one). Just redraw them as just two lines instead of what looks like four. It should turn out better.
