Don't know how many takers I'll get on this, but I want someone to remove the guy on the right completely. I still want the page tear/see-through effect going off to the right maintained though since it shows some of the left boy's hair and clothes with it.
I cut off more of the right guy than was there originally because it's not necessary to have much more showing beyond the left boy. But you need it at all for a reference, here's the original:
https://files.catbox.moe/hzduap.jpg 