>>1495014Here's a list of things I see - most of the greens are things that "bug me" but again, I cannot explain why for most - I'll try to explain Ones I can.
Purples are things that aren't errors, but compounded with other things, makes you cringe. These might clear up when the other issues get fixed.
Blue is consistency issues - like lines not continuing on when they should, like the line going past the glasses but not coming out the other side.
So, to explain a couple of the greens I see:
* The breasts. The blur looks nice, but it looks like there is a "line" of another color inthe blur. It also doesn't have a nice transition from the neck shadow to it (a gradient for the neck colors, maybe?)
* The forearm one - even if she's pressing it against herself, the boob's more likely to give and distort than her arm...
The two at the eyebrow: I'd terminate the ends for the lid proper with a taper, and the one going into the brow should transition better. As it is, it looks like a mis-placed line.
* The hair lines in the middle - There;s something about how they have been made bumpy that's bugging me - again, I wish I could explain, but usually, you'd only see this type of line at transitions where the hair splits apart into different "locks" or in pony tails. Sorry I can't be more descriptive...
The line near her ear lobe - should be more "flowy" - hair usually doesn't do this, unless something is under it...
Hope this helps some...
