>>1634889Good amount of line consistency issues.
Red: Hair Inconsistencies
Blue: Clothes Inconsistencies
Green: Skin Inconsistencies
Yellow: General Errors
For the hair, the front part is a good thickness and pretty uniform. However, the back part and the long hair strands have a ton of inconsistency issues. I recommend keeping it like you have at the front.
For the clothes, the fold in the middle seem to be a good thickness. Match the rest of the area like that.
For the skin, a lot of the points, especially at the elbows and the fingers, have thickness issues. Also, the major bend on her right arm has way too many nodes. Try to reduce it.
The yellow are just some general errors. The eye looks like it is missing a fill. The hair strand right next to it is also missing a fill. The leg has some color slivers in it, and the high heel is missing a fill.
All in all, the coloring is good, but the line work needs a good amount of work. Reducing the total nodes, keeping nodes consistent, and the thickness the same is key.
