>>1889041It's looking better. I meant in general about your lines is that their weights are inconsistent for the most part. Weight can give perspective and focus when used correctly but conversely, it can give a wobbly appearance to your lines, usually because of inexperience with the pen tool. What you want when vector tracing is to have crisp and exact looking lines, it's something acquired with practice. I took one of the tentacles at the back as an example of weight that is all over the place and affixed next to it the way I would make that same outline. Also, about the white lines of her dress, I didn't mean for them to go over the lineart, you corrected them as I was suggesting. Also, as pointed by the circle at the bottom next to her front tentacle, I noticed that there's a small gap in the shading. Last one in her hair is for another example of what I mean by a line that is inconsistent. The difference between the thicker and thinner parts of that same line is too big.
