>>1446905i googled for the original stitch and may have a variance, but heres what im seeing:
no holes/details/shadows in the veil of the hair. theres some small detail in the eyes missing, the lightest highlight - and double check the shapes a bit since i think they look a bit more heart like. the top lip is way too sharp, and i think the bottom part of the mouth is a bit to wide on the left side. shadows missing from the collar bone on both sides, and the armpits. tiny line not connected near her right elbow. the navel needs more definition, add an outline. some fills might be poking out slightly on the lower hair strands. did you add a shadow on her left arm and hand? it looks fine, either way - but the fill between her palm and the dress (its really tiny) doesnt have the transparency of the rest of the wing in that area. small lines on her right rear dont seem to point inward enough, or theres a part of an outline missing there. finally, definitley recheck the shadows in the lower part of the skirt. i put it next to the reference i found for you so you can see - the skin tone needs to be shaded and a lot of cloth shadows could be added.
its a fantastic job either way, for what its worth. i think that the colors may have gotten a bit washed out overall, though (with the exception of the red ribbon). definitely would like to see her hair a tad more orange, particularly in the shadows, i think it would add a lot more definition. no rush on fixing her up of course, the more time spent the better.
>>1446910the gradients are coming off very flat in a few places, consider the form the shadow is on. the shape of the thigh and the calf, for example. otherwise looking pretty smooth.