>>1495237I hope this is more to your liking then. I didn't agree with everything you marked, but most of the things you mentioned have been adjusted. The eye-lines on her left eye for example are what they are. One of them is her eye brow, the other her eye lid (I assume at least). I changed the colouring a bit though, hopefully that'll make it look less awkward.
If there is something else that should be changed, let me know. Your feedback is quite helpful, thanks for that.
