>>2127421Another update.
Lineart is almost done. All that's left is the tip of the flagpole, then i can move on to coloring.
If you look close, you can see all the areas I've improved upon the original (ie the arm holding the flagpole and some of the hair). Anatomically speaking, there is something about the hand that's pointing out that simply feels wrong... I tried to fix it up a bit, but I'm not 100% satisfied with that hand....