>>1918196Thanks for accepting my feedback regarding the skin colour.
Since you mentioned it, I took another look at the lineart and noticed a spot where you might be able to imrove it a little. One strand of hair seems noticeably "stiff" to me compared to the rest which flows nicely. It's really difficult to tell the different strands apart on the artwork I provided you (Might actually be the most difficult part of the artwork to work with, or is it?), so I'm not even sure myself if my suggestion is spot-on. But I've marked for you what I think might be a better interpretation for the different strands of hair for the purposes of your lineart.
Other than that, I've got nothing else to say at the moment except I'm still looking forward to see your completed vector, of course.