>>1601993>>1602125Made the fixes you suggested as well as went over the line work to improve consistency. I also made the middle part of the hair band lines a bit thicker to maybe simulate the foreground background thing, but I didn't really notice too much of a difference.
Also took off the blur on the highlights on the eyes as you suggested.
>>1602796Since this looks like its ready for color I have a question for you. Do you want me to try and preserve the blurred shading on the hair or do you want the crisp lines that vectors are able to bring out.
I'll wait for your response before I continue.