>>1986561>If you have any advice that'd be coolYou missed a lot of details on her face. Here's how I would do the face on pic attached.
Also, you missed the gradients on the shading of her skin.
Circled in red, there's a blush cut off at the bottom and the other circle is some sort of graphical glitch, might be caused by a mask or could be fixed by re-exporting?
In yellow are some examples of lineart going way too thin. Try and keep your lineart consistent for the most part.
