>>1647250Here's some of the things I dislike, other then the overal cheating method this style uses to keep from drawing in things like her other leg, but given that and the style...
The circled are the primary things I have beef with. You have a lot of hash marks, and they are TOO precise. Human hands don't work that way! You need to add in imperfections in thickness and angle to make it more believable!
I also think your hair consistency needs work: it's thicker on the top of her head than it is down bottom. If anything, I'd make it ALL the thin lines, to give it a better sense of delicacy, and I would nix the blocks of black in her hair (not the lines themselves - it's complicated to explain) and make those shadows going into naturally-tapering hair lines.
Same with the solids on her breast, and sailor uniforms: I'd make the lines proper, and make the shadows and the hashmarks a darker blue.
Also, with your export, the jaggies are making it look wonky - can't tell if the lines re nice and crisp, or if you have kinks from the nodes.
Hope some of this helps...