>>1960648Skin tone is the most noticeable. Usually when doing these the original image will have very pale skin that doesn't translate over very well. I usually switch color options over to HSB and up the saturation and move the hue to a more red. The original color was an unsaturated yellow, and the face i drew over is a more saturated red (see her hand for the difference).
On the bottom side of the hair there was a strand drawn on the top part but left out on the bottom. the strands on the left are thicker than the original, but to be honest I couldn't fix it in a way that looked good. I kind of think the area would look better with them left out.
>>1962071The original image has a very dark and shaded tone, which is really noticeable in her hair and skin. When colors look off i'd recommend looking up a reference. for (
>>1961847) I looked up official art and based colors off that. Some shapes end early instead of coming to the end hear her neck and chest. The string things I drew using the line tool to have a more consistent thickness. Lastly I really don't recommend adding lines to highlight details in there types of images. Because only that area has lines, it looks off. Usually drawing the shading in images can give the extra details desired, but since the original image doesn't have that it be better off with nothing.