>>1523423Wish I could take this up, I have no confidence in making good shading though.
>>1523492Circled the nose because it doesn't have a black fill.
Not sure what's happening with that one spot of the bangs.
I would use a stroke for the object she's holding, so it's perfectly straight.
her left ear is a bit larger than her right.
The hair with a square around it is because the angle and curve of it doesn't seem natural.
The circle at the top left of the image is where that curve has a bump, smooth it out more.
Any other circled area is just me suggesting some slight tweaking to make the line less thick.
>>1523495Some of the towel is showing between the line of her arm and the skin colour, just past her right ear.
Looks good in the end, glad you took our suggestions.
